Comments on: New David Gray Album + Contest

By: BJ

BJ — Tue, 06 Oct 2009 18:08:59 +0000

Long nights
Sleepless they may be
Morning’s cold kiss

Firehawk — Mon, 05 Oct 2009 21:39:40 +0000

my ears long to bleed
my thighs quiver for gray’s fresh
my loin satisfied

chon — Thu, 24 Sep 2009 03:37:21 +0000

PPS- I wrote that in 12 seconds after googling “haiku” to remind myself how many syllables goes in each line. Here’s another:

I shot my friend Shark
I don’t know why I did it
Oh please forgive me

chon — Thu, 24 Sep 2009 03:23:38 +0000

chon — Thu, 24 Sep 2009 03:23:09 +0000

Hard to keep breathing
My lungs are full of fluid
Dead in the water

Chon Odom

Cody — Thu, 24 Sep 2009 03:13:39 +0000

So, if nobody else enters,
Can this little poem be the winner?
I do want this prize.